Wikipedia:Dispute resolution noticeboard/Archive 31#Wiley Protocol, T. S. Wiley discussion
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Wiley Protocol, T. S. Wiley
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Dispute overview
- Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?
For over five years, there has been only one editor for these two papers. I am the subject's husband and, as COI, I do not edit the document, but make suggestions in the talk page. The editor WLU is so irretrievably biased about this subject that I need another editor to look this over. The entries in the article are extremely damaging to the subject, and have been for years. The article is slanted and arguments to the contrary, including sworn testimony to the US Senate, are dismissed. In the most recent conversation, WLU dismissed the topic as a fringe theory on a fringe theory.
Users involved
- Who is involved in the dispute?
:* {{user|WLU}}
:* {{user|Nraden}}
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Here are some comments from just the past few days short paragraphs from the talk page that illustrate his bias:
:Here is the reference to the rebuttal of Rosenthal in the journal Menopause - [http://journals.lww.com/menopausejournal/Citation/2009/16010/To_the_Editor.36.aspx] Thanks for making the changes so far. Neil Raden (talk) 14:39, 28 April 2012 (UTC)
:The worst part of the article is this phrase "potential financial conflicts of interest regarding financial incentives." No sources. There are no conflicts of interest, that is a criticism from ten years ago. Today, Wiley provides only packaging material (syringes, bags, labels and packet inserts) to the compounding pharmacies (about 100 at present). This is no royalty or kickback. The vast amount of revenue from the Wiley Protocol goes to pharmacies and physicians. Pharmacies purchase the other materials from sources specified in their contracts, and there is no financial activity between those suppliers and Wiley. It's a squeaky clean operation. Unless you can source something to the contrary, I would suggest you remove this right away. The entire relationship between Wiley, doctors and pharmacies is clear and above board. Neil Raden (talk) 14:48, 28 April 2012 (UTC)
:Is T.S. Wiley's SWORN TESTIMONY to the US Senate not a reliable source? It seems to me that her sworn testimony, where she is articulate about her approach and quite critical of mainstream medicine, more compelling than some doctor with no credentials in this field (Erika Schwartz) who uses her husband's connection to the NYT to trade on Suzanne Somers' notoriety and get published in the newspaper. Seems like a real lack of balance to me. Neil Raden (talk) 15:17, 28 April 2012 (UTC)
:Here;s an example. Much of the criticism of the WP is based on the conclusions of the Women's Health Initiative (which has itself come under attack.) Wiley states in her testimony, "The failure of the WHI trial is partially due to the lack of understanding of the biology of the reproductive and menopausal state as well as, the indiscriminant choice of study subjects without well defined entry criteria, such as on the average enrolling subjects 12 to 15 years into menopause, creates unfathomable noise for the outcome." Is this not equivalent to Rosenthal's ethical concerns? A published criticism of a trial? Neil Raden (talk) 15:32, 28 April 2012 (UTC)
::A letter to the editor is a reliable source only for the opinion of the letter's author. Wiley's sworn testimony is similarly just reliable as a source about her own opinion. In the case of actual experts, those opinions can be worth including, but given Wiley's lack of actual quantification and expertise in a relevant area (a degree in anthropology and three scientific papers), it's a dubious inclusion. Wiley giving sworn testimony doesn't make her right, and it doesn't make her an expert - nor does being articulate. Wiley giving testimony before congress is not the same thing as appearing in a peer reviewed journal, and if I saw Wiley's opinion on the WHI page, I would remove it as a fringe expert not worth including. The Wiley protocol is a fringe theory of a fringe theory that is regarded as dubious by the medical establishment. That's where the due weight should fall, irrespective the failings of Erika Schwartz's page. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 17:37, 28 April 2012 (UTC)
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Yes, I have been patient with WLU for years, on the Talk page only, but the prominence of Wikipedia in searches is harming Wiley as the article reflects the negative opinion of WLU and no one else. He has stated very clearly in the past that he is very much opposed to the subject matter, whihc makes him a poor choice of editor, especially as sole editor. Here is my question: If someone defames you in a reliable source, how are you to defend yourself on Wikipedia if everything you say is "original research?" Even a letter to the editor of a respected medical journal, WRITTEN BY A THIRD PARTY M.D. is dismissed. If there is controversy, why isn't the whole controversy aired, not just one side?
- Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)
Not yet.
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Resolving the dispute
- Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?
I would like WLU to be asked to recuse himself from these two article and ask for some help finding some editors who can moderate this objectively.
- How do you think we can help?
I'm not sure, but if we can't get some other eyes on this, it would be better to remove both articles
: removed the offending starwmwnt Neil Raden (talk) 04:19, 10 May 2012 (UTC)
Neil Raden (talk) 15:35, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
=Wiley Protocol, T. S. Wiley discussion=
The Wiley protocol is a subset of bioidentical hormone replacement therapy, which has no mainstream credibility - a fringe theory. Accordingly, due weight requires the page reflect the mainstream opinion and not give the impression this is a well-founded, well-substantiated scientific and medical approach, and should include what criticisms are available. Neil doesn't like this, but we are not a place to promote unfounded ideas. I have no issue with another editor editing the page in compliance with the P&G.
Neil has been admirable in restricting his edits to the page in question, as one of the few regular contributors I am by default the person he is likely to talk to about this - but the page is adequate as is as far as I'm concerned. I have seen no new sources that I think should be integrated. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 16:54, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
:WLU has not been admirable, he poses as a fair editor but wields a heavy pen against ideas he doesn't like. Have a look at his work on the Bioidentical Hormone Replacement Therapy page. He should be banned. Please see my many suggestions ignored on the talk page.
:WLU contradicts himself - if the Wiley Protocol is a fringe theory of a fringe theory, why is it notable to Wikipedia? The controversy? That's been over for 5-6 years. Wiley has trained doctors around the world and thousands of people follow the protocol. If Wiley and the Wiley Protocol are notable enough to warrant Wikipedia pages, why not actually DESCRIBE the Wiley Protocol. There are three words of criticism and controversy to every word that describes the subject. Another contradiction is that WLU excoriates Dr. Erika Schwarz but uses her unfounded opinion freely to denigrate Wiley's work. Pick a foot and stand on it. WLU's statements in the Talk page depict a personal tinge and are far from objective. And I would be willing to bet he is completely uninformed abut the subject. All I ask is to have an editor who is not openly hostile to hormone therapy to judge all of this on its merits.
:WLU uses a couple of sources to shoot down Wiley, which are full of errors, but allows no defense, even a published rebuttal in the same journal where the paper was published. There are dozens of testimonials about the WP on Youtube, including 6 or 8 by doctors. Dr Erika Schwartz on Page 6 of the New York Post, a gossip page with pinups? That's a reliable source? The same Dr Erika in the National Enquirer? C'mon. If someone defames you on Wikipedia, what are you supposed to do, wait for a stranger to defend you in a "reliable source?" My suggestion is that WLU step aside (as I have in editing the articles) and that we restructure the articles to a pro/con format instead of this 6 years long ad hominem. It is materially affecting Wiley's ability to pursue her work because Wikipedia is a powerful source of information. Neil Raden (talk) 01:13, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
::I am a regular mediator/clerk here at this noticeboard. First, let me note that making legal claims or threats, or anything that even resembles them, is one of the fastest and easiest ways of becoming blocked from editing, see WP:LEGAL. If you feel that you need to make legal claims, please contact the Wikimedia Foundation via their [http://wikimediafoundation.org/wiki/Contact_us contact page], but otherwise entirely refrain from making or alluding to such claims and I would strongly suggest that you also go back through the material that you have posted here (and elsewhere) and remove all references to libel. If you feel an assertion about a living person in an article or in a discussion is not supported by reliable sources, as defined by Wikipedia policy, please follow the instructions in the biographies of legal persons (BLP) policy by immediately removing the material. If it is restored, then report the issue to the biographies of living persons noticeboard, but remember that while issues of libel may underlie the BLP policy, discussing or making claims or threats about libel will still probably get you blocked. Second, this noticeboard and other dispute resolution processes here at Wikipedia generally do not work very well on open-ended claims about bias about entire articles. If you have specific assertions in the article which you feel are not reliably sourced, then please point them out. Otherwise, you may not get much response here. Third, I've not looked at the article or the talk page, but if the example you give above (the one following "Here are some comments from just the past few days short paragraphs from the talk page that illustrate his bias:") is typical, I see no bias at all in his response given there. Sworn testimony and letters to the editor are, indeed, not generally considered to be reliable sources at Wikipedia and I fail to see what it is that you might consider to be biased in that response. Fourth, I see from this discussion that you have expressed surprise and disagreement with Wikipedia's sourcing policy as much as five years ago, but seem to still be struggling with its ramifications. Could it be that what you are identifying as bias in WLU is actually nothing more than the effect of Wikipedia's verifiability policy, where all that can be reported here is what is reported in reliable sources, as defined by Wikipedia? As noted in that 2007 discussion, it sometimes happens that all a matter is notable for, based on Wikipedia standards, is the negative things about it, and positive things have not been reported in a way that allows them to be reported here, with the result that the Wikipedia article appears to be biased when in fact it is merely limited. If the negative things are, indeed, reliably sourced (again, as defined by Wikipedia), then it is unlikely that the article will be removed. Regards, TransporterMan (TALK) 21:21, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
:::I did not make a threat of legal action. What I said was that some things the editor said about Wiley in talk pages verged on libelous. There was no threat real or implied. But I'm not satisfied with your answer because when a third party makes damaging claims about you that are not factual in a so-called reliable source, you have no recourse on Wikipedia, and these statements are damaging in a very real way. I found it extremely frustrating that a third party rebutted these claims in the very same journal, but the editor refused to acknowledge them. His application of Wikipedia policy is very selective and I would appreciate it if you would consider this more closely. Neil Raden (talk) 16:03, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
::::Word to the wise: I strongly advise that you follow the advice TransporterMan gave you instead of denying that you did it. Then once you have purged your posts (including the one above) of words like "libelous", we will be free to examine your claims of bias. --Guy Macon (talk) 01:27, 5 May 2012 (UTC)
Suggestion I concur with Guy Macon and TransporterMan. Even using the phrase "verged on libelous" suggests that there may be cause for libel charges to be started. We understand that you believe that there is a lack of accuracy in the article, however there are ways to express your thought (such as parliamentary language) without bringing the legal aspect of the equation into play. Hasteur (talk) 13:25, 7 May 2012 (UTC)
:Normally I would examine Neil Raden's claims and, if they turned out to be accurate, I would take appropriate action to fix the problems. Instead I am ignoring the claims and not looking at the page; there is no way in hell i am going to get involved in a Wikipedia dispute where one side is making thinly-veiled legal threats that I might get sued if I fail to agree with their position. --Guy Macon (talk) 09:22, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
: I reworded. Mea culpa. Also added c=some comments to the Wiley Protocol talk page. Neil Raden (talk) 18:45, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
:: Actually, I'll just paste them here to make it easier to follow. This article has so many errors in it, I don't know where to start, There is also a Wiley Protocol for Men, women's testosterone, melatonin and thyroid, all transdermal preparations, and a cortisol replacement. There is also a patented anti-aging cream, also transdermal and dispensed by prescription only, as are the others with the exception of melatonin. There has never been any controversy about any of these except the women's protocol, and hat controversy dates to 2005 and I believe 2007. There is a 400 page clinical practice guide for the doctors compiled from a dozen years of clinical experience (of the doctors), a rigorous program of testing of the preparations for purity and consistency that the licensed pharmacies must adhere to quarterly, as well as testing of the compounding techs to ensure they do not absorb any of the materials. These are all contractual obligations. The wo-day seminar concentrates on topics of endocrinology and her research that lead to the creation of the protocols and the second day lead mostly by doctors teaching clincal practice, a course so packed with material that it is certified for 17 CME's (Continuing Medical Education), 75% of a doctor's annual requirement. So in addition to all of the (dated) controversy, it migtt be a good idea to actually explain what the WP is and the how the program works. All adverse reactions are reported to Julie Taguchi MD and there have been no serious ones in 12 years. There have been cases where people haven't done well, that's medicine. Not every one responds the same, Some are non-compliant (the protocol takes some work to follow) or they've added supplements that interfere with the protocol, which carries a warning: "WARNING: Herbs, Supplements and some Prescription Drugs may diminish the effectiveness of this treatment," as well as detailed packet inserts on use, etc. So I guess you could still say it's "potentially dangerous," but there is no evidence of it._ Neil Raden (talk) 18:53, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
:::None of the controversies regarding the Wiley Protocol have been resolved, to my knowledge. Debv (talk) 07:48, 10 May 2012 (UTC)
::::Given the lack of sources (beyond Neil's assertions) I can't see any way this can move any further forward as a complaint, or even as an expansion of the article. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 15:07, 10 May 2012 (UTC)
::::I'm the complainant here, and was hoping to get the opinion of someone other than WLU. It goes without saying that Debv's opinion, owner of a WIley hate site, is not needed here. There is only one source that mentions concerns about the Wiley Protocol. Dr. Highnote was one of the authors and is currently president of the organization that published it. She denies that any doctor ever said that, it was in fact an uninvited guest from Debv's organization. Not a doctor. She wants to get a retraction into the record. What would Wikipedia consider an acceptable reliable source? Neil Raden (talk) 16:13, 10 May 2012 (UTC)
:::::There are only two citied sources for the negative comments about the Wiley Protocol, Rosenthal and the ACAM Proceedings. I've already asked for instructions about a retraction by one of the authors of the ACAM article. The Rosenthal article in the journal Menopause was full of factual errors that were disputed by Dr. Julie Taguchi MD, published in the same journal. WLU wrote that a letter to the editor is not a reliable source. I disagree. Taguchi figured prominently in the Rosenthal article, was interviewed at length by Rosenthal, and widely misquoted. Taguchi didn't offer an opinion, she disputed Rosenthal's facts. That is relevant. At the very least, mention of Taguchi's rebuttal is essential as it casts doubt on Rosenthal's credibility. Neil Raden (talk) 22:55, 10 May 2012 (UTC)
::::::There is some background information about this topic and the editors involved in it here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons/Noticeboard/Archive34#Wiley_Protocol_and_T._S._Wiley_.28closed.29 --Guy Macon (talk) 05:10, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
:::FWIW I've got copies of the Taguchi letter to the editor and Rosenthal's response (and can provide them if requested). I saw nothing that struck me as requiring immediate addition. I'll re-read them at some point to confirm, but I certainly don't see either as a key source that demands the article be substantially rewritten. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 15:38, 16 May 2012 (UTC)
:::: I find this opinion bizarre. Here is what the Wikipedia article says, "The Wiley Protocol has been criticized as unethical due to the start of a Phase II clinical trial with no Phase I, a lack of approval by an institutional review board, a lack of an experienced scientific investigator leading the trial, no inclusion or exclusion criteria and no evidence that the study population has been told that the research has not passed an ethical review,[6][9]" Taguchi directly disputes every one of those claims in the same journal. How can you NOT reference it when Rosenthal is your only source for this statement? This is precisely why I need other editors to look at this. There should be a follow on statement that says, "These claims are dismissed in a published LTTE to the same journal, claiming that Rosenthals's facts are completely wrong. There was nan IRB number given, and Dr. Taguchi has been a principal investigator on over 40 clinical trials." Taguchi gave Rosenthal this information in phone interviews.I don't know if she just misunderstood or committed academic fraud to make a point, but you cannot let her one source stand when there is credible published evridence it is wrong. Am I just wasting my time arguing with you, since your mind is already made up, or are other editors reading this? Neil Raden (talk) 23:22, 18 May 2012 (UTC)
:::::You say nothing of Rosenthal's response to Taguchi, which was published in the same issue. Debv (talk) 09:25, 19 May 2012 (UTC)
::::::Debv makes my point for me - Rosenthal's reply starts with something like "Thanks to Dr. Taguchi for indicating she did not understand my article". The two together net to zero as far as I'm concerned. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 12:16, 19 May 2012 (UTC)
:::::::You titled the section "Controversy." You can't have a controversy without two sides. Now publish the other side or I will. If you revert it, it will escalate this.This dispute resolution has not been helpful. It's just you and me again. Neil Raden (talk) 15:28, 19 May 2012 (UTC)
== Wiley Protocol: Who are the players and what are their interests? ==
I would like to step back and look at the big picture, which might involve asking questions that have been answered before, so please be patient.
My first question is this: among those who have posted to the Wiley protocol article, talk page or to this noticeboard entry, what is your involvement? Are you a relative of one of the people mentioned in the article? Do you control or contribute to an off-wiki website that covers this topic? Are you a patient that has had this or a competing treatment? Are you in any way involved with a competitor?
Note that there is nothing wrong with any of the above, but full disclosure is strongly advised. I will have more questions later. --Guy Macon (talk) 19:50, 19 May 2012 (UTC)
:From my user page: "I run the web site [http://wileywatch.org/ Wiley Watch], which scrutinizes T. S. Wiley, her Wiley Protocol, and its stakeholders." My cumulative revenue from this endeavor to date is exactly $0.00. I don't accept donations and I don't endorse Wiley's competitors. Debv (talk) 21:28, 19 May 2012 (UTC)
::Thanks! Like I said, nothing wrong with that, as long as it is disclosed. Any connection to rhythmicliving.org, or is that someone else? Also, have you decided to voluntarily not edit the article because of a potential COI? (I am not saying you should or should not or that you do or do not have a COI - I am just getting a feel for the issues and participants at this point).
::I also have a question about [ http://wileywatch.org/wiley_and_wikipedia ] (the links to wikiscanner are dead, BTW; -- looks like a temporary situation as they do some work on the site) Have you brought these concerns up on any Wikipedia noticeboard such as WP:SPI or WP:COIN? --Guy Macon (talk) 02:27, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
:::Rhythmic Living is run by a woman whom I’ve come to consider a friend and we’re certainly of very like mind when it comes to the Wiley Protocol. We are not the same person, contrary to baseless claims that have been made here.
:::No, as the histories show I don’t make substantive, non-minor edits to these articles. I’m content to provide information and perspective on the talk pages. I haven’t edited the content proper of these articles in over five years.
:::As for the issue with Wikiscanner and the anonymous edits that were happening at the time, that was nearly five years ago. It hasn’t been a concern since, not to my recollection.
:::Thanks for the time and attention you’re bringing to this. Debv (talk) 05:45, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
:I am T.S. Wiley's husband and I agreed to not directly edit the Wiley Protocol or the T.S. Wiley article. I contribute my information only to the discussion pages. I did make one exception. I edited the Wiley Protocol page to enter the US patent # it had received. WLU immediately reverted it with no comment, showing his continuing lack of good faith. When I questioned him, he said I included no reference. Duh, it would have taken him 30 seconds to find it on the USPTO website, or he could have just asked me for the link instead of deleting it. When I provided the link, I guess he had no choice but to put it back in. But that is the only instance in five years for which I made an edit to the page. I would like debv to answer your question about her connection to rhythmicliving.org. We believe they are the same person and Debv is a sockpuppet for Laurel McCubbin who runs rhythmicliving. You should also know that rhythmicliving was originally a site devoted to the Wiley Protocol (hence the name rhythmic, which is the keystone of the Wiley Protocol), but became a hate site when Wiley would not allow McCubbin to monetize the site. The sole purpose of both sites is to spread distortion and outright lies about the Wiley Protocol. It's a longstanding vendetta, not a disagreement over a medical protocol. Neil Raden (talk) 04:41, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
:Also, I have no direct financial interest in the Wiley Protocol, I am not paid by any of her ventures. I'm just a husband who is sick and tired of seeing his wife's name and work dragged though the dirt by two people (who may just be one person) and by a Wikipedia editor who applies WP as it suits his point of view. All I want is a fair article, not a lot of excuses why half-baked sources are allowed and bonafide ones dismisses. The Wiley Protocol article doesn't even describe the Wiley Protocol. Neil Raden (talk) 04:47, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
::Without saying who I think is right or wrong (right now I just want a list of the players and their interests), I can assure you that I plan on seeing that this is handled fairly and according to Wikipedia's principles. I will get help from someone more experienced if needed.
::I would also like to mention that when I ask a question, "I prefer not to say" is a perfectly acceptable answer. This is not a court or an interrogation room, and Wikipedia has a strict policy of protecting user privacy. That being said, the answers I have gotten so far are incredibly useful. --Guy Macon (talk) 05:14, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
::I'm explicitly not responding to any of the baseless accusations above. Debv (talk) 06:16, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
::Just to save others the investigation: Neil Raden did add content to Wiley protocol on February 1, 2011 about a patent issued: [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wiley_protocol&diff=411489078&oldid=405383657] Above he claims that this was immediately reverted by WLU and without comment. Well WLU did in fact remove the text but it was over a year later, on April 27, 2012: [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wiley_protocol&diff=489541012&oldid=467277059]. And it wasn't without comment: [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Wiley_protocol&diff=489541001&oldid=489538235]. Debv (talk) 06:52, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
I am still hoping to hear from WLU and to find out, if he/she chooses to reveal the info, whether there is any connection with Wiley, a competitor / critic of Wiley, etc. --Guy Macon (talk) 14:50, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
:I have no connection to Wiley, personal or professional. I have extensive experience editing the bioidentical hormone replacement therapy page (of which the WP is a type). I stumbled over the WP or BHRT as part of routine editing, since both weren't very good pages I edited both to their current, MEDRS-compliant versions. I don't promote or criticize BHRT or the Wiley protocol in any meaningful way bar my activities on wikipedia (which as far as I'm concerned is simply routine editing of two fringe topics that have very little mainstream credibility). Neil has generally refrained from editing, and the edits I've seen haven't been ones with substantial COI problems (AGF however...) I have copies of several sources (Rosenthal being one I certainly have) in case you need any. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 22:14, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
::Also, I'm a he. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 22:15, 20 May 2012 (UTC)
{{od}}
I just checked Wiley protocol and T. S. Wiley and I don't see anyone else involved other that the three listed above. Anyone disagree?
Which brings up the question, why are there only two editors listed in the "Who is involved in the dispute?" at the top of this noticeboard entry? (No harm done -- the real problem is when someone doesn't get the news that there is a noticeboard discussion -- but please be more careful in the future.)
Also, does anyone disagree with the assertion that those two pages are where the dispute centers?
OK, so a couple of closing remarks and I will start the next section.
No more accusing Debv of being the author of the Rhythmic Living website. She (he?) has said it isn't true, and here at Wikipedia we Assume Good Faith. In fact, let's all try to avoid any personal comments and keep this a discussion about what is on the Wikipedia pages.
If anyone thinks Debv should not be editing because of a Conflict of Interest (nobody has indicated that) the place to bring it up is Wikipedia:Conflict of interest/Noticeboard after this is settled. The description of the dispute only lists a Neil Raden / WLU dispute. With that, I am dropping that topic.
:As I've indicated I'm content to provide information on the talk pages and I feel no reason at this point, nor have I in recent history (meaning about the last five years), to edit the articles directly, apart from technical, non-controversial edits. Debv (talk) 10:36, 22 May 2012 (UTC)
=Evidence supporting / refuting alleged bias =
In this section, we will be discussing specific edits that someone believes are a problem. I think we all know how to cite sources. but if anyone is a bit rusty with citing edits, please see Wikipedia:Simplest diff guide, Wikipedia:Simple diff and link guide and Wikipedia:Complete diff and link guide for help. I want to see a link for every source cited and a diff for every edit discussed.
I am going to start with this claim from earlier in this thread:
"The worst part of the article is this phrase 'potential financial conflicts of interest regarding financial incentives.' No sources."
That statement is in the lead of Wiley protocol.[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wiley_protocol&diff=489610981&oldid=489541012] (Note how I added a diff leading to the edit where it was added. That's the sort of thing I am looking for). The edit comment for that edit was "rewrite to be closer to body text" So the next thing to do is to look at the article as it existed at that time.[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wiley_protocol&oldid=489610981]
So, is that statement in the body text? Yes. It is in the criticism section of the page as it existed when the edit was made, and it is still there today: "...concerns over conflicts of interest regarding financial incentives..." and there is a citation:
({{cite journal |author=Rosenthal MS |title=The Wiley Protocol: an analysis of ethical issues |journal=Menopause |volume=15 |issue=5 |pages=1014–1022 |year=2008 |pmid=18551081 |doi=10.1097/gme.0b013e318178862e |url=}})
That edit was made in 2008[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wiley_protocol&diff=244166594&oldid=243673131]
The pubmed link in the cite leads to an abstracy that uses this wording: "Breaches of professional ethics include conflicts of interest with respect to financial incentives"
It appears that the claim "The worst part of the article is this phrase 'potential financial conflicts of interest regarding financial incentives.' No sources." is dubious. We will look at the claims made right after that a bit later -- please be patient, one claim at a time.
Is there a diff showing anyone on the article talk page questioning the use of that phrase, either in the lead or in the criticism section? Anything claiming it is unsourced or violates WP:WEIGHT? If so, was there a response? --Guy Macon (talk) 02:36, 21 May 2012 (UTC)
:Debv was inactive when Nraden started this section. On those two pages, I don't think there are any other regular editors. Debv has also in the past indicated she would not edit directly.
:Citations in the lead are optional per WP:LEAD, I didn't make a point of including them. I have a copy of Rosental's article if you would like the full text. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 16:23, 21 May 2012 (UTC)
::I agree that there is no need for a citation in the lead if the claim is cited later. I usually suggest that only on articles that are very large, which makes the later cite hard to find.
::Thanks for the offer, but I don't need to study the sources in any great depth unless someone claims that the page misrepresents what is in the source.
::Right now I am focusing on what Nraden called "the worst part of the article" (thus his main complaint). He claimed that it was unsourced and when I checked I found that it was sourced. That's actually OK - you are allowed to make a mistake about whether something is sourced, especially if you need to look farther down the page to find the cite. What I am focusing on at the moment involves the "have you tried to resolve this dispute already?" question at the top of this noticeboard entry. I am looking for evidence about whether this issue was brought up on the talk page and if so whether the issue was responded to, and I want Nraden to look this up rather than someone else posting the answer. The reason is because if there was no effort to resolve the dispute on the article talk page, I am going to recommend closing this noticeboard entry and sending all of you back to the talk page with the option of opening another one on the same issue if you cannot resolve it there. --Guy Macon (talk) 17:29, 21 May 2012 (UTC)
:::(Sound of Crickets chirping...) --Guy Macon (talk) 19:40, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
::::I'm not sure what you're looking for from me at least. The only section on the Wiley protocol talk page is my discussion with Neil. Pretty much all the content and context can be found on that talk page and this discussion board. I have no issue with closing this noticeboard and sending it back to the talk page, but that won't address Neil's concerns since the only person who regularly edits the page (me) doesn't see any need to make any changes. The WP is still unsubstantiated, and no new sources have turned up to indicate the wikipage is out of date. Close it if you'd like, but the dispute will remain unresolved - Neil thinks the page is biased, I don't, and nobody else seems interested in seeing if I'm right or wrong. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 03:15, 24 May 2012 (UTC)
:::::Actually, someone is interested in whether the page is biased. Me. Above, I analyzed Neil's main complaint about what he believes to be bias on your part. I found this claim to be totally without merit and to be based upon an assertion of something being unsourced -- an assertion that is factually incorrect. I am more than willing to closely examine any further allegations of bias, and I will have no problem with telling you that you are being biased if I find evidence of that. So far, I have not seen any evidence of bias, and Neil went silent when his first allegation was shot down. As far as I can see, you [WLU] have done everything right, but I am open to evidence to the contrary. --Guy Macon (talk) 05:49, 24 May 2012 (UTC)
:::::: I have lots of other concerns, not just the one you resolved. Most importantly, the article is just not informative. Reading it, you still would have no idea what the Wiley Protocol was, except the controversy. Second item, you haven't addressed the issue over Dr Taguchi's refuting Rosenthal in the journal Menopause. WLU refuses to add Wiley's newest peer-reviewed paper, which plays against claims she is "unqualified." I could go on, but I do not want to see this issue go back to the talk page because nothing will change. Neil Raden (talk) 15:46, 24 May 2012 (UTC)
:::::::Guy, if you're going to do it anyway it might be worth simply closing this section and engaging with Neil and I on the talk page about specific sources and points, your call either way but I am glad another editor is engaging. That's ultimately what the page needs (in my opinion). As an FYI, the article Neil is talking about is [http://aipadvances.aip.org/resource/1/aaidbi/v2/i1/p011206_s1?bypassSSO=1 this one] in which she and a coauthor publish a mathematical model in a physics journal. I think it's irrelevant to the page. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 17:36, 24 May 2012 (UTC)
::::::::WLU, I prefer to keep it here so I can focus narrowly on the dispute. The way thing should work is that, while we are all working on resolving the dispute here, other improvements where nobody disagrees are ongoing on the article talk page - fixing grammar, finding sources, that sort of thing.
::::::::Neil, no problem with being busy, but please try to let us know. You can say even you want to take three months off, and we will work it out (probably by archiving and re-opening). Getting Biographies of Living Persons right is very important to Wikipedia, and I want to fully examine every issue you have.
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OK, moving to the next issue, Neil, I need something better defined than "the issue over Dr Taguchi's refuting Rosenthal in the journal Menopause. WLU refuses to add Wiley's newest peer-reviewed paper." First, when you bring something like that up, include a link (can you confirm that the link WLU gave was what you were talking about?) Second, I need a diff showing where you asked that it be added and a diff where there was a response to the request. That will give me the details I need to evaluate the claim. Did you suggest it as an external link? Did you want to put in some specific wording with that link as a citation supporting it? I can get some of this from WLU, but I prefer to hear the details directly from you. Take us much time as you need; we want to get this right. --Guy Macon (talk) 23:32, 24 May 2012 (UTC)
:I believe there are two issues above - one related to Rosenthal and one related to Wiley's newest paper. "Rosenthal" refers to one of two peer reviewed articles written by M Sara Rosenthal ([https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/18551081 here] and [https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/18075509 here]) but is probably referring to the first one, found in the journal Menopause. Julie Taguchi is a researcher who has collaborated with TS Wiley. She wrote a letter to the editor of Menopause, and I believe that is the document Neil is referring to (see [http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/19131849.1 here], but I haven't been able to find a full-text online; I can e-mail it if need be). Rosenthal replied to Taguchi's letter in the same issue, and I believe refuted Taguchi's points sufficiently that I see no need to include them. That's my side of things, Neil can correct me if I'm wrong. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 15:28, 25 May 2012 (UTC)
:: Related: Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard#AIP Advances -Guy Macon (talk) 00:43, 26 May 2012 (UTC)
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Civil war in Afghanistan (1992–1996)
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Dispute overview
- Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?
User:TopGun placed pov tags on the article without providing a clear reasoning. Initially he stated the reason was, "To be specific, it is stating Pakistan's support for Taliban at multiple occasions as a fact which is clearly not a neutral POV." When attribution was provided to all the statements involving Pakistan and the Taliban and the tags were removed, TG placed the tags again, this time refusing to provide a reasoning on the talk page referring to a mediation in this topic area (which is however not inclusive of this article).[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Requests_for_mediation/India,_Afghanistan_and_Pakistan] The mediation among other things deals with the question whether Pakistan's support to the Taliban 1994-2001 can be stated as a matter of fact or needs attribution, but attribution in this article was provided. TG failed to provide any reasoning for the tags including on the mediation pages and I don't think the article needs to spot tags without any specific reasons being brought forward.
Users involved
- Who is involved in the dispute?
:* {{user|TopGun}}
:* {{user|JCAla}}
- Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)
Yes.
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Resolving the dispute
- Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?
[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Civil_war_in_Afghanistan_%281992%E2%80%931996%29#POV Discussion on talk page]
- How do you think we can help?
Please provide your input whether pov tags are justified in the article for the content mentioning Pakistan's relationship to the Taliban. This is the content in question:
- By October 1994 the Taliban movement had according to academic consensus and on-the-ground reports attracted the support of Pakistan{{cite book|last=Shaffer|first=Brenda|title=The Limits of Culture: Islam and Foreign Policy|year=2006|publisher=MIT Press|isbn=978-0262693219|pages=267|quote=Pakistani involvement in creating the movement is seen as central}}{{cite book|last=Forsythe|first=David P.|title=Encyclopedia of human rights|year=2009|publisher=Oxford University Press|isbn=978-0195334029|pages=2|edition=Volume 1|quote=In 1994 the Taliban was created, funded and inspired by Pakistan}}{{cite book|last=Gardner|first=Hall|title=American global strategy and the 'war on terrorism'|year=2007|publisher=Ashgate|isbn=978-0754670940|pages=59}}{{cite book|last=Jones|first=Owen Bennett|title=Pakistan: eye of the storm|year=2003|publisher=Yale University Press|isbn= 9780300101478|pages=240|quote=The ISI's undemocratic tendencies are not restricted to its interference in the electoral process. The organisation also played a major role in creating the Taliban movement.}}{{cite book|last=Randal|first=Jonathan|title=Osama: The Making of a Terrorist|year=2005|publisher=I.B.Tauris|isbn=9781845111175|pages=26|quote=Pakistan had all but invented the Taliban, the so-called Koranic students}}{{cite book|last=Peiman|first=Hooman|title=Falling Terrorism and Rising Conflicts|year=2003|publisher=Greenwood|isbn=978-0275978570|pages=14|quote=Pakistan was the main supporter of the Taliban since its military intelligence, the Inter-Services Intelligence (ISI) formed the group in 1994}}{{cite book|last=Hilali|first=A. Z.|title=US-Pakistan relationship: Soviet invasion of Afghanistan|year=2005|publisher=Ashgate|isbn=978-0-7546-4220-6|pages=248}}{{cite book|last=Rumer|first=Boris Z.|title=Central Asia: a gathering storm?|year=2002|publisher=M.E. Sharpe|isbn=978-0765608666|pages=103}} who was unhappy with the unsuccessful Hekmatyar, which saw in the Taliban a way to secure trade routes to Central Asia and establish a government in Kabul friendly to its interests.{{cite book|last=Pape|first=Robert A|title=Cutting the Fuse: The Explosion of Global Suicide Terrorism and How to Stop It|year=2010|publisher=University of Chicago Press|isbn=978-0226645605|pages=140–141}}{{cite book|last=Harf|first=James E.|title=The Unfolding Legacy of 9/11|year=2004|publisher=University Press of America|isbn=978-0761830092|pages=122|coauthors=Mark Owen Lombard |no-tracking=true }}{{cite book|last=Hinnells|first=John R.|title=Religion and violence in South Asia: theory and practice|year=2006|publisher=Routledge|isbn=978-0415372909|pages=154}}{{cite book|last=Boase|first=Roger|title=Islam and Global Dialogue: Religious Pluralism and the Pursuit of Peace|year=2010|publisher=Ashgate|isbn=978-1409403449|pages=85|quote=Pakistan's Inter-Services Intelligence agency used the students from these madrassas, the Taliban, to create a favourable regime in Afghanistan}} Although Pakistan followed a policy of denial when it came to its connections to the Taliban,{{cite book|last=Hussain|first=Rizwan|title=Pakistan And The Emergence Of Islamic Militancy In Afghanistan|publisher=|isbn=|page=208}} senior Pakistani officials such as Interior Minister Naseerullah Babar would later state, "we created the Taliban"{{cite book|last=McGrath|first=Kevin|title=Confronting Al Qaeda: new strategies to combat terrorism|year=2011|publisher=Naval Institute Press|isbn=978-1591145035|page=138}} and former Pakistani President Musharraf would write "we sided" with the Taliban to "spell the defeat" of anti-Taliban forces.{{cite book|last=Musharraf|first=Pervez|title=In the line of fire: a memoir|year=2006|publisher=|isbn=|page=209}}
- In 1996, the Taliban returned to seize Kabul, this time as analysts such as Ahmed Rashid describe with the decisive support of Pakistan{{cite book|last=Rashid|first=Ahmed|title=Fundamentalism Reborn?: Afghanistan and the Taliban|publisher=|isbn=|page=87}} as well as Osama Bin Laden and Saudi Arabia.
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:Without even reading into the article in great detail, the neutrality issues are very obvious. There is heavy use of loaded words, and this probably needs to be addressed first. After that is attributing points of view correctly. Just because sources X and Y says something does not mean Z is true. For example, something like "By October 1994 the Taliban movement had according to academic consensus and on-the-ground reports attracted the support of Pakistan" is an issue, because it gives the impression that this is the only viewpoint on the matter. Generally, for attributing points-of-view, you use the "X person of Y company/publication said blah blah blah" but other factors are important here. The above sentence is essentially saying that Pakistan supports a terrorist organisation, albeit in a worded up way, and exceptional claims require exceptional sources. The sources provided are from peer-reviewed journals, but whether the views within are fringe theories is a different matter altogether. However, if there is already an RFC open regarding this article, then that should be pursued first, and re-discussed later if necessary. The article will need lots of work, either way. Regards, Steven Zhang Get involved in DR! 15:11, 28 May 2012 (UTC)
::Thanks for the hint with regards to "loaded words", I improved that, maybe you can have another look. But that is not the real issue here. On the matter of Pakistan's support to the Taliban among reliable sources that is indeed the only viewpoint among reliable sources, except for Pakistan's denial which has been identified as a specific policy of denial by the sources and has been superceded by later Pakistani admissions to some parts of the support. There exists no reliable source stating "Pakistan did not support the Taliban 1994-2001". JCAla (talk) 15:26, 28 May 2012 (UTC)
:::If the issue is "did Pakistan support the Taliban?" then the best path forward is the following:
:::#Editors must provide specific quotes from reliable sources. The list of sources above in this DRN is a good start, but the next step is to provide specific quotes from those sources which say "Pakistan supported the Taliban" or similar statements.
:::#Conversely, if editors have sources that say "Pakistan did not support the Taliban" or "Pakistan opposed the Taliban" or similar, then quotes from those sources should be identified. If sources cannot be found for this opposing viewpoint, then the tag should be removed, and the article must represent the other viewpoint (presuming sources are available for the latter). See WP:BURDEN.
:::#The sources should be assessed for reliability. Blogs and the like are not acceptable. Potentially biased sources may be used (if reliable), but will need to be noted as such per WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV.
:::#The material in the article should be updated to reflect what the sources say. It is safe, but crude, to simply quote the sources in the article and identify each source. Better is to summarize the sources in an encyclopedic paraphrase (and if sources are potentially biased, identify the source per WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV).
:::#If the sources have multiple viewpoints, the article needs to include them all, although WP:UNDUE requires that the article must convey to the reader the relative strength of the viewpoints amongst the reliable sources.
:::Following those steps (on the article Talk page, not here) should be a good path forward. --Noleander (talk) 20:05, 28 May 2012 (UTC)
- Hi, I left a message on the article's talk page which JCAla completely ignored and opened this discussion here. We have an RFC on the issue at Talk:Pakistan which will show some consensus on the matter - I advised JCAla to wait for it to be over though this was replied with bad faith accusations. Further more this discussion is a fork of the formal mediation already started on the topic area specifically covering Pakistan and Taliban dispute which has been lingering for months. This discussion should be moved to the same so as not to be counter productive: Wikipedia talk:Requests for mediation/India, Afghanistan and Pakistan. PS. I agree with the points given by the two uninvolved users above. --lTopGunl (talk) 22:51, 28 May 2012 (UTC)
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