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Gd could also mean Gadolinium, (and as mentioned, GD Graphics Library). So is the redirect from GD really a good idea here? Fayefox 10:27, 25 April 2006 (UTC)

:The redirect is no longer here, as GD now points to a disambiguation page. Removed the redirect notice. --KJRehberg 18:02, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

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Has anyone considered whether discussing or listing various GD-held contracts are? I am new to Wikipedia editing, but thought that htis might be helpful to people researching GD.Dc3tech 18:37, 20 July 2007 (UTC)

This article has several general references in the References section. But it has very few inline references. That's why the tag is at the top of the article. A footnote to International Directory of Company Histories, Volume 40 would be like Pederson 2001, p. page. or Pederson 2001, pp. pages.. Actual footnote exmapled can be seen in F-15 Eagle and General Dynamics F-111 articles. -Fnlayson (talk) 19:50, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

The architect Charles Goodman who died in 1992 has been incorrectly linked to this page as being Charles Goodman a director of the company who is very much still alive. Could someone please remove the link? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 160.83.160.132 (talk • contribs)

Where is the Electric Launch Company? That article claims: At the end of the war the company merged with its sister company Electric Boat to form the nucleus of a new corporation General Dynamics. Here no word about it.--WerWil (talk) 11:40, 1 December 2008 (UTC).

This is yet another of the companies that redirect to the General Dynamics article which has no information. Just saying that XXXXX company was acquired by General Dynamics in YEAR is essentially useless. N4aof (talk) 20:49, 25 June 2019 (UTC)

I can't edit this page. Can somebody please update the page to reflect the merger Ordinance and Tactical System and Armament and Technical Products. Press release is here http://www.generaldynamics.com/news/press-releases/detail.cfm?customel_dataPageID_1811=18539 Ctempleton3 (talk) 02:04, 12 September 2013 (UTC)

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The article provided an interesting history of GD’s aerospace business.

There is also the history of its pre-World War I submarine business but not much mention of subsequent submarine work in the century since.

Should that be included in this article, too? Seems like an important part of the company’s story. —107.77.232.166 (talk) 22:58, 16 August 2019 (UTC)

Hi! I'm posting here on behalf of General Dynamics, a company I have declared my COI. The article is rated C class across the six Wikipedia projects, giving a lot of room for improvement. To start, I noticed some inaccuracies and omissions in the Infobox, Corporate governance, Financials, and See also sections. Below are the suggested improvements to each part of the article. You can also see a draft version of these changes in my Sandbox. Let me know if there are any questions!--Chefmikesf (talk) 20:33, 12 January 2021 (UTC)

:Hey Afus199620, I have a few updates to the Financials and other tables on this article. Would you be open to take a look at the proposed changes below?--Chefmikesf (talk) 20:33, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

::Thanks Afus199620, Do you think you can also make Financials and Corporate governance their own sections after History?--Chefmikesf (talk) 21:22, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

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Shipbuilding

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| founder = John Philip Holland

| location_city = Reston, Virginia

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| key_people = Phebe Novakovic
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• Combat vehicles and tanks
• Fighter jets
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| industry = Aerospace
Defense
Shipbuilding

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| founder = John Philip Holland

| location_city = Reston, Virginia

| location_country = United States

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| key_people = Phebe Novakovic
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• Auxiliary ships
• Business jets
• Combat vehicles
• Communications systems
• IT systems
• Jones Act ships
• Munitions
• Nuclear-powered submarines
• Stealth Ship
• Tanks
• Vision Systems
• Watercraft
• Weapon systems

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• Artificial intelligence
• Charter Services
• Command and control
• Cybersecurity
• Fixed-base operator (FBO)
• Intelligence services
• IT
• IT service management
• Maintenance, repair, and overhaul (MRO)
• Naval design
• Shipbuilding
• Ship repair
• Software development

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• Electric Boat
• General Dynamics Information Technology
• General Dynamics Land Systems
• General Dynamics Mission Systems
• General Dynamics UK
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Current Corporate governance content

Current members of the board of directors of General Dynamics are: Catherine Reynolds, Nicholas Chabraja, James Crown, William Fricks, Paul Kaminski, John Keane, Lester Lyles, Phebe Novakovic, William A. Osborn, Laura J. Schumacher and Robert Walmsley.{{cite web |url=http://investorrelations.gd.com/phoenix.zhtml?c=85778&p=irol-govboard |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20150323232446/http://investorrelations.gd.com/phoenix.zhtml?c=85778&p=irol-govboard |url-status=dead |archive-date=2015-03-23 |title=General Dynamics : Investor Relations : Board of Directors |publisher=Investorrelations.gd.com |date=2013-01-01 |access-date=2014-08-17 }}

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General Dynamics current chief executive officer is Phebe N. Novakovic.

Current as of December 2020

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General Dynamics has $30.9 billion in sales as of 2017{{Cite web|url=http://fortune.com/fortune500/general-dynamics/|title=General Dynamics|website=Fortune|language=en-US |access-date=2018-11-10}} primarily military, but also civilian with its Gulfstream Aerospace unit and conventional shipbuilding and repair with its National Steel and Shipbuilding subsidiary.

In 2004, General Dynamics bid for the UK company Alvis plc, the leading British manufacturer of armored vehicles. In March the board of Alvis Vickers voted in favor of the £309m takeover. However at the last minute BAE Systems offered £355m for the company. This deal was finalized in June 2004.{{cite news|url=https://www.theguardian.com/business/2004/jun/04/themilitary|title=BAE outguns US rival with £355m bid for Alvis |access-date=30 June 2017|newspaper=The Guardian|date=4 June 2004}}

The corporation's subsidiaries are donors to the Canadian Defence and Foreign Affairs Institute.[http://www.cdfai.org/donorinformation.htm Canadian Defence & Foreign Affairs Institute – Donor Information] {{webarchive|url=https://web.archive.org/web/20120215022956/http://www.cdfai.org/donorinformation.htm |date=2012-02-15}}. cdfai.org{{importance inline|}}

10% of General Dynamic stock is owned by the Crown family, which includes Nancy Carrington Crown and Steven Crown. This is the family's largest single asset.{{Cite web|url=https://www.forbes.com/profile/crown/|title=Crown family|website=Forbes|language=en |access-date=2019-09-02}}

Proposed Financials content

For the fiscal year 2019, General Dynamics reported net income of US$3.484 billion, with an annual revenue of US$39.350 billion, an increase of 8.72% over the previous fiscal cycle. General Dynamics's shares traded at over $150 per share, and its market capitalization was valued at over US$43.27 billion in January 2021.{{Cite web|title=General Dynamics Financial Statements 2005-2019 {{!}} GD|url=https://www.macrotrends.net/stocks/charts/GD/general-dynamics/financial-statements|access-date=2021-01-12|website=www.macrotrends.net}}

Current as of December 2020. {{Cite web|title=General Dynamics Financial Statements 2005-2019 {{!}} GD|url=https://www.macrotrends.net/stocks/charts/GD/general-dynamics/financial-statements|access-date=2021-01-12|website=www.macrotrends.net}}

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{{Portal|Virginia|Companies}}

• Top 100 Contractors of the U.S. federal government
• List of companies headquartered in Northern Virginia

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• Top 100 Contractors of the U.S. federal government
• List of companies headquartered in Northern Virginia
• List of military aircraft of the United States
• List of United States defense contractors
• List of current ships of the United States Navy
• List of currently active United States military land vehicles
• List of women CEOs of Fortune 500 companies
• List of shipbuilders and shipyards

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Updating the Lead Paragraph

:Hey Afus199620, I drafted an updated Lead below. Would you be open to review and if you think it improves the article, publishing the new version of the Lead?--Chefmikesf (talk) 20:22, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

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Current Lead

General Dynamics Corporation (GD) is an American aerospace and defense corporation. As of 2019, it was the fifth-largest defense contractor in the United States, and the sixth-largest in the world, by sales.[https://www.cnbc.com/2019/01/10/top-10-defense-contractors-in-the-world.html "Top 10 Defense Contractors in the World"]. CNBC, 2019-01-10, accessed 2019-07-03. The company ranked No. 92 in the 2019 Fortune 500 list of the largest United States corporations by total revenue.{{Cite web|url=https://fortune.com/fortune500/2019/search/|title=Fortune 500 Companies 2019|website=Fortune|language=en-US |access-date=2019-07-03}} It is headquartered in Reston, Fairfax County, Virginia."[http://gd.com/about/contacts/business-units-contacts/ Business Units] {{Webarchive|url=https://web.archive.org/web/20150909223253/http://www.gd.com/about/contacts/business-units-contacts/ |date=2015-09-09 }}." General Dynamics. Retrieved on September 7, 2011. "Corporate Headquarters General Dynamics 2941 Fairview Park Drive, Suite 100; Falls Church, Virginia 22042-4513"

Formed in 1954 with the merger of submarine manufacturer Electric Boat and aircraft manufacturer Canadair,{{Cite news|url=https://www.nytimes.com/1975/11/29/archives/general-dynamics-to-sell-canadair-ottawa-says-it-will-acquire.html|title=GENERAL DYNAMICS TO SELL CANADAIR Ottawa Says It Will Acquire Aircraft‐Manufacturing Unit for $38 Million|last=Times|first=Robert Trumbull Special to The New York|date=1975-11-29|work=The New York Times |access-date=2019-08-21|language=en-US|issn=0362-4331}} it evolved through multiple mergers and divestitures and changed markedly in the post–Cold War era of defense consolidation. General Dynamics' former Fort Worth Division, which manufactured the F-16 Fighting Falcon, was sold to the Lockheed Corporation in 1993, but GD re-entered the airframe business in 1999 with its purchase of business jet manufacturer Gulfstream Aerospace.{{Cite news|url=https://www.nytimes.com/1999/05/18/business/general-dynamics-to-acquire-gulfstream.html|title=General Dynamics to Acquire Gulfstream|last=Wayne|first=Leslie|date=1999-05-18|work=The New York Times |access-date=2019-08-21|language=en-US|issn=0362-4331}}

10% of General Dynamic stock is owned by the Crown family, which includes Nancy Carrington Crown and Steven Crown. This is the family's largest single asset.{{Cite web|title=Crown family|url=https://www.forbes.com/profile/crown/|access-date=2019-09-02|website=Forbes|language=en}}

Proposed Lead

General Dynamics Corporation (GD) is an American publicly traded, aerospace and defense corporation headquartered in Reston, Fairfax County, Virginia. As of 2020, it was the third-largest defense contractor in the United States, and the third-largest in the world, by sales.[https://www.cnbc.com/2019/01/10/top-10-defense-contractors-in-the-world.html "Top 10 Defense Contractors in the World"]. CNBC, 2019-01-10, accessed 2019-07-03. The company is a Fortune 100 company, and was ranked No. 83 in 2020.{{Cite web|title=General Dynamics Company Profile|url=https://fortune.com/company/general-dynamics/|access-date=2021-04-06|website=Fortune|language=en}}

Formed in 1954 with the merger of submarine manufacturer Electric Boat and aircraft manufacturer Canadair,{{Cite news|url=https://www.nytimes.com/1975/11/29/archives/general-dynamics-to-sell-canadair-ottawa-says-it-will-acquire.html|title=GENERAL DYNAMICS TO SELL CANADAIR Ottawa Says It Will Acquire Aircraft‐Manufacturing Unit for $38 Million|last=Times|first=Robert Trumbull Special to The New York|date=1975-11-29|work=The New York Times |access-date=2019-08-21|language=en-US|issn=0362-4331}} the corporation today is comprised of ten subsidiary companies with operations in 45 countries. The company’s products include Gulfstream business jets, Virginia- and Columbia-class nuclear-powered submarines, Arleigh Burke-class guided-missile destroyers, M1 Abrams tanks and Stryker armored fighting vehicles.

In 2020, General Dynamics had worldwide sales of $37.9 billion and a workforce of more than 100,000 full-time employees. The current chairman and chief executive officer (CEO) is Phebe Novakovic.

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Hi Sturmvogel 66, I noticed you're part of WP:Aviation and like military topics. I'm currently working on the General Dynamics Wikipedia article, there is room for improvement on a few sections. I have a COI with General Dynamics, so I will not edit the article myself but will present conceptual improvements on the talk page. To start, I rewrote the lead paragraph to clarify what the company does. Here is my proposed version. Any thoughts on this? --Chefmikesf (talk) 19:14, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

:You repeated the location of the company's HQ, but it looks fine other than that. I'm not very familiar with what's covered in the articles on defense companies, so I really can't tell what ought to be there that's missing.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:46, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

:: Hi Sturmvogel 66, Thanks for the feedback. I removed the second location and made some updates. The code was different from the post for some reason. My intention for the edits is to simplify the lead in case others wanted to add to it. Would you be open to making the update?--Chefmikesf (talk) 20:04, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

:::Sure, but I'd like to check out the articles on a couple of the other major US defense companies. What you have so far is the bare bones of the lede, but I don't know what else should be there. I find ledes the hardest part of an article to write as it's hard to strike a balance between summarizing things and providing too much detail.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:11, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

::::That sounds like a good approach. As I said, I'm open to additions to the Lead, the intention of this version is to clean it up, remove unnecessary content, and bring attention to this article that needs improvement. Best, Chefmikesf (talk) 23:04, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

:::::I've copied your lede over and cut the county from the location. I'd suggest reinstating the bit about the sale of the Fort Worth Division and would also suggest that you rework the bit about the ten companies to cover instead the four main business groups like shipbuilding, aerospace, etc. Go ahead and make those changes and I'll put the article on my watchlist to provide some oversight. Cite #3 needs to be wikified, by which I mean that it needs to be put into one of the various cite formats like cite news, cite web, etc. If you're not familiar with them let me know and I can give you some pointers. Once you're comfortable with doing that you can go ahead and do the same with any other cites that need to be properly formatted. Another thing you could do would be to provide a citation wherever a citation needed tag is located.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:30, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

:::::: Hi Sturmvogel 66, Your suggestions make sense. I'll move this conversation to the General Dynamics talk page, then I'll ping you again once I have these updates drafted. Best --Chefmikesf (talk) 22:53, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

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General Dynamics Corporation (GD) is an American publicly traded, aerospace and defense corporation headquartered in Reston, Virginia. As of 2020, it was the fifth-largest defense contractor in the world by arms sales, and 5th largest in the United States by total sales.{{cite web |title=SIPRI Arms Industry Database |url=https://www.sipri.org/databases/armsindustry |website=www.sipri.org |publisher=Stockholm International Peace Research Institute |access-date=7 August 2022}} The company is a Fortune 100 company, and was ranked No. 83 in 2020.{{Cite web|title=General Dynamics Company Profile|url=https://fortune.com/company/general-dynamics/fortune500|access-date=2021-04-06|website=Fortune|language=en}}

Formed in 1954 with the merger of submarine manufacturer Electric Boat and aircraft manufacturer Canadair,{{Cite news|url=https://www.nytimes.com/1975/11/29/archives/general-dynamics-to-sell-canadair-ottawa-says-it-will-acquire.html|title=GENERAL DYNAMICS TO SELL CANADAIR Ottawa Says It Will Acquire Aircraft‐Manufacturing Unit for $38 Million|last=Times|first=Robert Trumbull Special to The New York|date=1975-11-29|work=The New York Times |access-date=2019-08-21|language=en-US|issn=0362-4331}} the corporation today consists of ten subsidiary companies with operations in 45 countries. The company's products include Gulfstream business jets, Virginia- and Columbia-class nuclear-powered submarines, Arleigh Burke-class guided-missile destroyers, M1 Abrams tanks and Stryker armored fighting vehicles.

In 2020, General Dynamics had worldwide sales of $37.9 billion and a workforce of more than 100,000 full-time employees. The current chairman and chief executive officer (CEO) is Phebe Novakovic.

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General Dynamics Corporation (GD) is an American publicly traded, aerospace and defense corporation headquartered in Reston, Virginia. As of 2021, it was the fifth-largest defense contractor in the world by arms sales, and 5th largest in the United States by total sales.{{cite web |title=SIPRI Arms Industry Database |url=https://www.sipri.org/databases/armsindustry |website=www.sipri.org |publisher=Stockholm International Peace Research Institute |access-date=7 August 2022}} The company is a Fortune 100 company, and was ranked No. 94 in 2022.{{Cite web|title=General Dynamics Company Profile|url=https://fortune.com/company/general-dynamics/fortune500|access-date=2021-04-06|website=Fortune|language=en}}

Formed in 1954 with the merger of submarine manufacturer Electric Boat and aircraft manufacturer Canadair,{{Cite news|url=https://www.nytimes.com/1975/11/29/archives/general-dynamics-to-sell-canadair-ottawa-says-it-will-acquire.html|title=GENERAL DYNAMICS TO SELL CANADAIR Ottawa Says It Will Acquire Aircraft‐Manufacturing Unit for $38 Million|last=Times|first=Robert Trumbull Special to The New York|date=1975-11-29|work=The New York Times |access-date=2019-08-21|language=en-US|issn=0362-4331}} the corporation today consists of ten subsidiary companies with operations in 45 countries. The company's products include Gulfstream business jets, Virginia- and Columbia-class nuclear-powered submarines, Arleigh Burke-class guided-missile destroyers, M1 Abrams tanks and Stryker armored fighting vehicles.

In 2020, General Dynamics had worldwide sales of $38.5 billion and a workforce of more than 103,000 full-time employees. The current chairman and chief executive officer (CEO) is Phebe Novakovic.

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Electric Boat was established in 1899.

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20th-century acquisitions

• 1946 – Canadair purchased from the Canadian government.
• 1952 – Electric Boat became General Dynamics.{{cite web|url=http://www.gdeb.com/about/history/|title=General Dynamics Electric Boat - History|publisher=General Dynamics Electric Boat |access-date=April 22, 2020}}
• 1953 – Convair merged with General Dynamics.{{cite news|url=https://www.nytimes.com/1954/03/02/archives/boards-approve-convair-merger-general-dynamics-to-step-up-as-vast.html|title=BOARDS APPROVE CONVAIR MERGER; General Dynamics to Step Up as Vast Defense Complex if Stockholders Concur|work=The New York Times|date=March 2, 1954 |access-date=April 22, 2020}}
• 1955 – Acquired Stromberg-Carlson.{{cite web|url=https://www.gd.com/about-gd/our-history|title=Our History|publisher=General Dynamics |access-date=April 22, 2020}}
• 1957 - Purchased Liquid Carbonic Corporation of Chicago, Illinois, on September 30.{{cite web|url=https://explore.chicagocollections.org/marcxml/chicagohistory/30/rj49z1s/|title=Liquid Carbonic Industries Corporation records|publisher=Chicago Collections |access-date=April 22, 2020}}
• 1959 – Henry Crown acquires company and becomes majority shareholder.
• 1962–1963 – Convair-produced Mercury-Atlas rockets launch four manned Mercury missions into low Earth orbit, including John Glenn.{{cite video| year =1959| title =Deny Rocket Lag. Atlas Firing Keynotes U.S. Missile Build-Up, 1959/01/29 (1959)| url =https://archive.org/details/1959-01-29_Deny_Rocket_Lag| publisher =Universal Newsreel| access-date =February 22, 2012}}
• 1971–1985 David S. Lewis, Jr., was chairman and chief executive officer. During his tenure, General Dynamics' revenues and earnings quadrupled.
• 1982 – Formed General Dynamics Land Systems after the acquisition of Chrysler's combat systems.
• 1995 – Acquired Bath Iron Works from Prudential Insurance.
• 1996 – Acquired Teledyne Vehicle Systems.{{cite web|url=https://www.nytimes.com/1996/11/08/business/450-million-dynamics-deal-for-two-units.html|title=$450 Million Dynamics Deal For Two Units|work=The New York Times|date=November 8, 1996 |access-date=April 23, 2020}}
• 1997 – Acquired Lockheed Martin Defense Systems and Lockheed Martin Armament Systems.
• 1997 – Acquired Advanced Technology Systems, formerly an operating unit of Lucent Technologies.
• 1997 – Acquired Computing Devices International, formerly a division of Ceridian Corporation.
• 1998 – Acquired National Steel and Shipbuilding Company.
• 1999 – Acquired Gulfstream Aerospace from Forstmann Little.
• 1999 – Acquired GTE Government Systems, Communication Systems, Electronic Systems and Worldwide Telecommunication Systems Divisions.
• 2000 – Acquired Saco Defense from New Colt Holding Corp. which owned it since 1998.{{cite web |url=http://www.generaldynamics.com/news/press-releases/detail.cfm?customel_dataPageID_1811=13292|title=General Dynamics Completes Acquisition of Saco Defense Corp.|date=June 30, 2000|publisher=General Dynamics |access-date=28 May 2014|url-status=dead|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20140529052121/http://www.generaldynamics.com/news/press-releases/detail.cfm?customel_dataPageID_1811=13292|archive-date=29 May 2014}}{{cite news|url=http://articles.courant.com/1998-05-20/business/9805200013_1_colt-small-arms-fn-manufacturing|title=Colt's Agrees To Buy Gunmaker In Maine|date=May 20, 1998|newspaper=Hartford Courant |access-date=28 May 2014}}

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21st-century acquisitions

• 2001 – Acquired PrimeX Technologies Inc.[http://www.bizjournals.com/tampabay/stories/2001/01/22/daily19.html "Primex Technologies acquired by General Dynamics"] Tampa Bay Business Journal, January 24, 2001.
• 2001 – Acquired Galaxy Aerospace Company from Israeli Aircraft Industries (IAI).{{cite web|url=https://www.wsj.com/articles/SB988724351894337276|title=General Dynamics Agrees to Buy Galaxy Aerospace for $330 Million|work=The Wall Street Journal|date=May 1, 2001 |access-date=April 23, 2020}}
• 2001 – Acquired Spain's Santa Bárbara Sistemas, one of the world's oldest arms manufacturers.
• 2002 – Acquired German company EWK Eisenwerke Kaiserslautern, and changed its name to General Dynamics European Land Systems-Germany.
• 2003 – Acquired GM Defense from General Motors.
• 2003 – Acquired the Austrian heavy vehicle company Steyr-Daimler-Puch Spezialfahrzeug (SSF) from an Austrian investor group and formed the basis of General Dynamics European Land Systems (GDELS).
• 2003 – Acquired Veridian and Digital Systems Resources.
• 2003 – Acquired Datron's Intercontinental Manufacturing Company (IMCO) Unit.{{cite news|url=https://aviationweek.com/brief-general-dynamics-completes-imco-buy|title=In Brief: General Dynamics completes IMCO buy|work=Aviation Week & Space Technology|date=September 5, 2003 |access-date=April 23, 2020}}
• 2004 – Acquired Spectrum Astro.{{Cite web|title = General Dynamics finishes buy of Spectrum Astro|url = https://washingtontechnology.com/articles/2004/07/12/general-dynamics-finishes-buy-of-spectrum-astro.aspx|website = washingtontechnology.com |access-date = 2019-11-09}}
• 2005 – Acquired MAYA Viz Ltd, the primary developer of the US Army's Command Post of the Future software into General Dynamics C4 Systems.{{cite news|url=https://www.post-gazette.com/business/businessnews/2005/04/02/Defense-giant-buys-Maya-Viz/stories/200504020124|title= Defense giant buys Maya Viz|work=Pittsburgh Post-Gazette|last=Shropshire|first=Corilyn|date=April 2, 2005 |access-date=April 23, 2020}}
• 2005 – Acquired Tadpole Computer.{{cite news|url=https://aviationweek.com/general-dynamics-acquires-tadpole-computer|title=General Dynamics acquires Tadpole Computer|work=Aviation Week & Space Technology|date=August 17, 2005 |access-date=April 23, 2020}}
• 2005 – Acquired Itronix.{{cite web|url=https://www.rcrwireless.com/20050805/archived-articles/general-dynamics-buys-itronix|title= General Dynamics buys Itronix |publisher=RCR Wireless|date=August 5, 2005 |access-date=April 23, 2020}}
• 2006 – Acquired FC Business Systems.{{cite news|url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/archive/business/2005/12/14/general-dynamics-to-buy-fc-systems/ed0f2304-1087-4c48-b112-421a23479327/|title= General Dynamics to Buy FC Systems |newspaper=The Washington Post|last=Merle|first=Renae|date=December 14, 2005 |access-date=April 23, 2020}}
• 2006 – Acquired Anteon International.
• 2007 – Acquired Mediaware International.{{cite web|url=https://www.militaryaerospace.com/communications/article/16724900/general-dynamics-acquires-mediaware-international|title=General Dynamics acquires Mediaware International|publisher=Military & Aerospace Electronics|date=November 15, 2007|access-date=April 25, 2020}}
• 2008 – Acquired ViPS, Inc.[http://investor.shareholder.com/hlth/releasedetail.cfm?ReleaseID=313710 "HLTH Announces Agreement to Sell ViPS Unit to General Dynamics for $225 Million"]. HLTH Corporation Press Release, June 3, 2008. {{webarchive |url=https://web.archive.org/web/20081011012055/http://investor.shareholder.com/hlth/releasedetail.cfm?ReleaseID=313710 |date=October 11, 2008}}
• 2008 – Acquired Jet Aviation.[https://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2008/08/19/AR2008081902603.html?hpid=sec-business "General Dynamics to Boost Gulfstream With Jet Aviation Purchase"]. Washington Post, August 20, 2008.
• 2009 – Acquired Axletech International.[https://www.carlyle.com/media-room/news-release-archive/general-dynamics-completes-acquisition-axletech-international "General Dynamics Completes Acquisition of AxleTech International"]. The Carlyle Group, January 4, 2009.
• 2010 – Acquired Kylmar Ltd.{{Cite news |url=http://archive.boston.com/business/articles/2010/06/22/general_dynamics_acquires_kylmar_ltd/ |title=General Dynamics acquires Kylmar Ltd.|work=Boston.com |access-date=2017-09-20}}
• 2011 – Acquired Vangent, Inc. from The Veritas Capital Fund III, LP.[https://www.washingtonpost.com/business/capitalbusiness/general-dynamics-to-acquire-arlington-contractor-for-nearly-1-billion/2011/08/16/gIQAHHKkJJ_story.html "General Dynamics to Acquire Arlington Contractor for Nearly $1 Billion"]. Washington Post, August 16, 2011.
• 2011 – Acquired Metro Machine Imperial Docks Inc.
• 2011 – Acquired Force Protection Inc.[https://www.reuters.com/article/us-generaldynamics-idUSTRE7A64U420111107 General Dynamics to buy Force Protection]. Reuters.
• 2012 – Acquired Open Kernel Labs.[http://www.nicta.com.au/media/current/general_dynamics_acquires_nicta_start-up_open_kernel_labs General Dynamics acquires NICTA start-up Open Kernel Labs]. NICTA, September 12, 2012.
• 2012 – Acquired Applied Physical Sciences.{{cite press release |title=General Dynamics Acquires Applied Physical Sciences Corp. |url=http://www.gd.com/news/press-releases/2012/12/general-dynamics-acquires-applied-physical-sciences-corp |date=December 21, 2012 |publisher=General Dynamics |access-date=December 3, 2016 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20161220034010/http://www.gd.com/news/press-releases/2012/12/general-dynamics-acquires-applied-physical-sciences-corp |archive-date=December 20, 2016 |url-status=dead }}
• 2016 - Acquired Bluefin Robotics into General Dynamics Mission Systems.{{cite press release |title=General Dynamics Mission Systems Acquires Bluefin Robotics |url=https://gdmissionsystems.com/articles/2016/02/22/news-2016-general-dynamics-mission-systems-acquires-bluefin-robotics |date=February 23, 2016 |publisher=General Dynamics Mission Systems}}
• 2018 – Acquired CSRA Inc. for about $6.8 billion.{{cite news |url=https://www.usatoday.com/story/money/business/2018/02/12/general-dynamics-buying-csra-6-8-billion/328387002/ |title=General Dynamics buying CSRA for about $6.8 billion|author=The Associated Press|author-link=The Associated Press|work=USA Today |publisher=Gannett Company |location=McLean, Virginia |date=February 12, 2018 |access-date=February 12, 2018}}{{cite news |url=https://www.cnbc.com/2018/02/12/general-dynamics-to-buy-csra-for-9-point-6-billion-in-cash.html |title=General Dynamics to buy government IT contractor CSRA for $6.8 billion |agency=Reuters |work=CNBC |publisher=NBCUniversal News Group |location=Englewood Cliffs, New Jersey |date=February 12, 2018 |access-date=February 12, 2018}}{{cite news |url=https://www.wsj.com/articles/general-dynamics-buying-csra-for-6-8-billion-1518436856 |title=General Dynamics Buying CSRA for $6.8 Billion |first1=Doug |last1=Cameron |first2=Cara |last2=Lombardo |work=The Wall Street Journal |publisher=News Corp (via Dow Jones & Company) |location=New York City |date=February 12, 2018 |access-date=February 12, 2018}}

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Divestitures

• 1967 – General Atomics was sold to Gulf Oil.{{cite web |url=http://www.fundinguniverse.com/company-histories/general-atomics-history/ |title=History of General Atomics |publisher=FundingUniverse |access-date=April 24, 2020}}
• 1969 - Forced by Federal order to divest itself of Liquid Carbonic Corporation in January; Liquid Carbonic was then purchased by Houston Natural Gas Co.{{cite web |url=https://explore.chicagocollections.org/marcxml/chicagohistory/30/rj49z1s/ |title=ECC {{!}} Liquid Carbonic Industries Corporation records |publisher=Chicago Collections |access-date=April 24, 2020}}
• 1976 – Canadair sold back to the Canadian government.
• 1981 – Following expropriation legislation passed by the government of the Province of Quebec, General Dynamics' Canadian subsidiary sold its 54.6% controlling interest in Asbestos Corporation Limited to the Quebec government-owned corporation, Société nationale de l'amiante (SNA).{{cite news |url=https://www.nytimes.com/1981/11/29/business/quebec-takes-a-gamble-on-asbestos.html |title=Quebec Takes a Gamble on Asbetos |work=The New York Times |last=Malcolm |first=Andrew H |date=November 29, 1981 |access-date=April 24, 2020}}
• 1991 – Data Systems Division sold to Computer Sciences Corporation.[http://articles.latimes.com/1992-10-06/news/mn-432_1_general-dynamics-divisions General Dynamics Sells a Third San Diego Unit]. Los Angeles Times, October 06, 1992.
• 1992 – Tactical Missiles Division to Hughes Aircraft Company{{cite news |title=Missile completion |work=Flight International |publisher=Reed Business Publishing |date=1992-09-02}}
• 1992 – Cessna was sold to Textron.{{cite web |title=Cessna History 1927–1939 |url=http://cessna.com/CessnaHistory/His/History-1927-1939.html |url-status=dead |publisher=Cessna |access-date=May 25, 2011 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20110227150253/http://cessna.com/CessnaHistory/His/History-1927-1939.html |archive-date=February 27, 2011}}
• 1992 – Electronics Division sold to Carlyle Group of Washington, D.C. and renamed GDE Systems.
• 1993 – Fort Worth Division, a producer of fixed-wing military aircraft, was sold to Lockheed Corporation.
• 1993 – Space Systems Division was sold to Martin Marietta.{{cite web |title=General Dynamics Sells Atlas Rocket Unit |url=http://articles.latimes.com/1993-12-23/business/fi-4948_1_general-dynamics-total |website=Los Angeles Times |date=23 December 1993 |access-date=25 September 2014}}
• 1994 – Convair's aerostructures unit's manufacturing work in San Diego was transferred to McDonnell Douglas.{{cite news |url=https://www.latimes.com/archives/la-xpm-1994-07-02-fi-11075-story.html |title= Convair Plant in San Diego to Close by 1996: Manufacturing: Move will end 1,900 jobs and the city's long tradition of building planes |work=Los Angeles Times |last=Kraul |first=Chris |date=July 2, 1994 |access-date=April 25, 2020}}
• 2006 – Material Service to Hanson.{{Cite news |last= Bob Tita |title= Material Service sold to Hanson; Lester Crown remains chair |work= Crain's Chicago Business |access-date= 2014-08-08 |date= 2006 |url= http://www.chicagobusiness.com/article/20060619/NEWS01/200021031/material-service-sold-to-hanson-lester-crown-remains-chair}}
• 2007 – Freeman United Coal Mining Co. sold to Springfield Coal Co. for an undisclosed amount.[http://www.redorbit.com/news/business/1054910/crown_ii_mine_closing_freeman_coal_sold_to_new_company Crown II Mine Closing; Freeman Coal Sold to New Company]. Red Orbit, September 4, 2007.
• 2010 – Spacecraft development and manufacturing (a business group within the Advanced Information Systems division) to Orbital Sciences Corporation.[http://www.businessweek.com/ap/financialnews/D9E84AEG0.htm Orbital buys General Dynamics' spacecraft business ]. BusinessWeek. {{webarchive |url=https://web.archive.org/web/20121023171701/http://www.businessweek.com/ap/financialnews/D9E84AEG0.htm |date=2012-10-23}}
• 2014 – Advanced Systems (another business line within Advanced Information Systems) to MacDonald, Dettwiler and Associates{{Cite web |url=https://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/mda-completes-strategic-capability-acquisition-in-the-united-states-278063631.html |title= MDA completes strategic capability acquisition in the United States |website=prnewswire.com |date= October 3, 2014 |access-date=2018-06-25 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20180626030456/https://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/mda-completes-strategic-capability-acquisition-in-the-united-states-278063631.html |archive-date=June 26, 2018 |url-status=dead}}

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